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13 years ago  #11
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13 years ago  #12
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Originally posted by artix Creative Critisism 1:

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Overall the comic is poor. However, this is your fist one and I will give you the benifit of the doubt. Im sure give or take a few attempts you will gain a creative humorous streak. This set of comics if given the chance has the potential to be great and I for one would like to see that potential. It would be nice if you could incorporate some slap stick comedy into your work, now that would be a sight for sore eyes.

Bold parts not understood/too long and boring to read .....And yeah I couldn't come up with a idea

13 years ago  #13
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Originally posted by artix
Originally posted by TheBrockStar
Originally posted by artix Creative Critisism 1:

Originality: **

Humor: *

Quality: ***

Block Images: **

Use Of Language: ***

Overall: **

Overall the comic is poor. However, this is your fist one and I will give you the benifit of the doubt. Im sure give or take a few attempts you will gain a creative humorous streak. This set of comics if given the chance has the potential to be great and I for one would like to see that potential. It would be nice if you could incorporate some slap stick comedy into your work, now that would be a sight for sore eyes.

Bold parts not understood/too long and boring to read .....And yeah I couldn't come up with a idea

I swear im wasted on you people...

lmfao......

13 years ago  #14
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13 years ago  #15
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