The weekly crunch WEEK 4
Death_H...Hence why I removed Lala's comments from my post - obviously that wasn't helpful criticism! lol. However Greenlines comment was if you choose to listen to it. Criticism is only helpful if it is taken on board.
BrockSTAR
I don't find this a bit interesting if your trying to be funny that's not working. Make it interesting and funny. And don't leave out details.i'm sorry, who forced you to read this? don't like it, don't read. it's fine for what it is, and i'm sure it'll get better with time.
Its called criticism and feedback... its the main driving mechanism for improvement. Without it nothing improves with time. Dumbass
This thread is retarded and dumb is not gonna help it get better in time
And her saying make it interesting and funny isnt gonna help either cause im tryna make it interesting and some people do find it interesting im trying that already arent i so nothing helped there
Hence why I removed Lala's comments from my post - obviously that wasn't helpful criticism! lol. However Greenlines comment was if you choose to listen to it. Criticism is only helpful if it is taken on board.
She didnt say anything i wasnt trying to do already
fuck ur thread
Ye i know.. Im beastin'
I don't find this a bit interesting if your trying to be funny that's not working. Make it interesting and funny. And don't leave out details.i'm sorry, who forced you to read this? don't like it, don't read. it's fine for what it is, and i'm sure it'll get better with time.
Its called criticism and feedback... its the main driving mechanism for improvement. Without it nothing improves with time. Dumbass
lol dumbass really? why are you upset by my comment? criticism without being constructive is just bitching. like brock said, neither of those comments are going to help him improve
BrockSTAR
this is so funnyYour face is funny
this is so funnyYour face is funny
I no thanks soo much i can hardly say that back to yah bra
greenlines
I don't find this a bit interesting if your trying to be funny that's not working. Make it interesting and funny. And don't leave out details.i'm sorry, who forced you to read this? don't like it, don't read. it's fine for what it is, and i'm sure it'll get better with time.
Its called criticism and feedback... its the main driving mechanism for improvement. Without it nothing improves with time. Dumbass
lol dumbass really? why are you upset by my comment? criticism without being constructive is just bitching. like brock said, neither of those comments are going to help him improve
Your comments aren't helpful either. Brock can take the comment however he likes.
BrockSTAR
this is so funnyYour face is funny
I no thanks soo much i can hardly say that back to yah bra
did you just call ma a bra
this is so funnyYour face is funny
I no thanks soo much i can hardly say that back to yah bra
did you just call ma a bra
it means bro bra

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