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13 years ago  #1
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Tell me what you thinks

13 years ago  #2
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13 years ago  #3
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Yup, my parents watch everything I am doing...I got a laptop ya know?

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Originally posted by Demhelius

post in the other thread

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No comments on my disturbing but absolute amazing comic

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i like it, looks like one of the trololol comics

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I made it in rage comic style

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Originally posted by artix Creative Critisism 1:

Originality: **

Humor: *

Quality: ***

Block Images: **

Use Of Language: ***

Overall: **

Overall the comic is poor. However, this is your fist one and I will give you the benifit of the doubt. Im sure give or take a few attempts you will gain a creative humorous streak. This set of comics if given the chance has the potential to be great and I for one would like to see that potential. It would be nice if you could incorporate some slap stick comedy into your work, now that would be a sight for sore eyes.

are you really like 14..? you sound ..97

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Originally posted by Demhelius
Originally posted by artix Creative Critisism 1:

Originality: **

Humor: *

Quality: ***

Block Images: **

Use Of Language: ***

Overall: **

Overall the comic is poor. However, this is your fist one and I will give you the benifit of the doubt. Im sure give or take a few attempts you will gain a creative humorous streak. This set of comics if given the chance has the potential to be great and I for one would like to see that potential. It would be nice if you could incorporate some slap stick comedy into your work, now that would be a sight for sore eyes.

are you really like 14..? you sound ..97

... Brock bring back the crunch lol

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Originally posted by Demhelius
Originally posted by artix Creative Critisism 1:

Originality: **

Humor: *

Quality: ***

Block Images: **

Use Of Language: ***

Overall: **

Overall the comic is poor. However, this is your fist one and I will give you the benifit of the doubt. Im sure give or take a few attempts you will gain a creative humorous streak. This set of comics if given the chance has the potential to be great and I for one would like to see that potential. It would be nice if you could incorporate some slap stick comedy into your work, now that would be a sight for sore eyes.

are you really like 14..? you sound ..97

he's pissed b/c he thought he was the oldest person on PB @ 92...

Last edited by JCsucks 13 years ago

"thats not gross. gross would be sayin i'd suck a fart out her ass and hold it in like a bong hit"- rogerharkey in reference to his love for selena gomez (quote of yr)

 

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