Originally posted by Vyper

Originally posted by greenlines

Originally posted by Vyper

Originally posted by Death_Hand_Luke

Originally posted by Vyper

Originally posted by greenlines

I don't find this a bit interesting if your trying to be funny that's not working. Make it interesting and funny. And don't leave out details.

i'm sorry, who forced you to read this? don't like it, don't read. it's fine for what it is, and i'm sure it'll get better with time.

Its called criticism and feedback... its the main driving mechanism for improvement. Without it nothing improves with time. Dumbass

lol dumbass really? why are you upset by my comment? criticism without being constructive is just bitching. like brock said, neither of those comments are going to help him improve

Your comments aren't helpful either. Brock can take the comment however he likes.

my comments weren't direct at brock, so weren't intended to help or hurt him. what i fail to understand is why you or anyone else would take their oh so precious time to read something they obviously don't like, much less post negative comments about it. after 4 weeks it's not like you don't know what you're getting here.

Hahaha how can someone tell they don't like something without reading it? Anyway, people are not saying its unreadable... just that it either needs to be funnier or have more interesting goings on that people don't already know.

The only support i get here is from:

Hanako

Graphik

RR123

Howie429

Demhelius

Ive forgot some but whatever the rest just either read and leave which is fine by me and its hella better then this is retarded and stupid

i know we had dat argument but i think its good u just need better jokes lol

Shut up you "dupe detector"

Just cause i "detected you"

Yeah me and "my" two accounts

You cant really talk cause i can just say same about your brother rafz

You catch Lalapoo, and manage to take $14,780 in cash from him. You earn 3662 EXP!

obviously your the only one who is mad here lala...got nothin to do but sit here and hate on everyone because your mad, when was the last time youve tried doing something positive on here?