i was kaptured at da begining,very detailed. wrote like a real book.

O_O ... intense shit. wtf man

i love writing stories, though, I did get bored with it at the end. I just hope it wins!

Ooh shit, bxboronigga ! What da fuck poppin my dude? Dam it’s been a minute. How U my dude?

Aint shit homie, glad to be home.Thats all. I miss all you guys. We miss you too homie. Dam 6 years homie. wait until you see everybody else. everyone is grown up now. Its crazy on da block now. Ah man, i could imagine. yo phelon215 told me tell you whats good and for you to write him. word give me his address so i could write him. How he doing? He’s doing good. I gave him all my amens before i left. He be in the dayroom all day just writin, working on his book or in gameroom playing razor hockey.

yo the block is so crazy now. wait until you see how these little dudes grew up. Remember Jaymeal? the dude from across town? yea, whats good with him? He got his own team now. He meet some guy named Sandin and they getting money now. I ain’t even going to front, they team is strong. they got 3 main guys that be putting in crazy work. Some dude name nickrox, nofuture & Drss. i was locked up with they man nickrox. you have look out and be careful around them dudes. they got this dude named beans, he's they sniper. He could shoot like a mother fucker. *^

dam dats krazy, jaymeal gettin it like dat? yea homie. dem syndikate guys jus went to war wit the harlem knights. speakin off them guys,wats gud wit them?

yo,you ben gone for 6 yrs,i told U shits Been crazy. rememba they co-leader, the homie swiss? yea ! he passed away. word on da street is beans sniped him from 5 blocks away. they all got the gone but never forgotten tattoo in swiss name. and donelite dropped his flag. he aint a harlem knight no more. DAAAAAAM ! dats crazy . i told you mad shit changed in da 6 yrs you eben locked up.

bxboronigga & jshank718 walks to the store and grabs a dutch and a lighter & returns to the benches outside the building.

WTF !? hurricanefish24 ? thats him? yea my friend, you see how big he got? call him over.nah,lets not do that. he run with jaymeal and them. stop playin he do? i remember when he was just a lvl 6 runner. dam he grew up! look at him, he lvl 15 now. dam these guys grew up. yea,its crazy on the block now. wanna head south so you can see your homies? yea, lets go. we out. my aunt live right next door from your man bangem904. he live 1090 mufasa ave apartment 4B, my aunt liv apartment 4D. oh thats crazy, we out.

" KNOKKNOK KNOK !"

Who is it? its me !

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH ! WELCOME HOME HOMIE. bangem wats relly gud homie?

Bang yells" yo, Bxboro is here ! everyone rushes the door to get to Bxboro. everyone was there. bangem, whisp, yungpow, stoneddkilla, supremagnetik, kdawg187, breezy,dubcity,illsmashyurface, jpistilino,beemdubayou,oldtime, og40thblak & whole riot squad. you could say it was a riot squad reunion. after 6 yrs bxboronigga is reunited with the people he went to prison for.

yo imma head to the store real quick and go see my aunt. alright man, cool. yea since you out get another box of dutches. yo shank,you want me to come with you? Nah, im good stonedkilla, i'll Be real quick. chill wit your homie Bxboro,im just going right next door.

*riiiiing, riiiiing.riiiing riiiiing* 43rd police station, tips department, how can i help you?

i just saw jshank718 & some guy went into 1090 mufasa ave. and theres a lot of noise.

ok ma’am do you know what apartment they went into? Yes, aprtment 4B.

thanks ma’am.

hey captain johnson, i just got a call from an informant, the whole riot squad is in 1090 mufasa avenue apartment 4D. call the A.T.F, the fire marshalls and the swat team. about time we get these motherfuckers ! today is our luckiest day. finally we put an end to the riot squad.

jshank718 returns from the store and goes to his aunt's apartment. he kisses his aunt, grandmother, his 2 sisters and his 7 nieces and nephews. shank stears in awe at his 3 week old new born niece.

BANG, BANG BOOOOM ! police, we have a warrant. jshank718 pulls out his gun and starts shooting. the cops return fire. in a hale of bullets and only 3 minutes of shooting. jshank718 survives 4 gunshot wounds, 2 cops wounded and one left dead and jshank's 5yr old niece and 2 yr old nephew & 76yr old grandmother is left dead.

after a 2yr trial, shank was found innocent of murder of law enforcement officer, innocent of 2 accounts of attempted murder due to a technicality but found guilty of illegal possession of a deadly weapon and was sentenced to 5 yrs federal prison.

if you figure out the twist in this story, it makes it so much better than it already iss

good stuff by all the writers btw